Editing Thursdays! 

Continuing the Royal Year 4 tradition of editing Thursdays, today the children took their purple pens and editing success criterias and set out to make their improvements!

To start with, the children split into 4 groups to start work on what they needed to do to improve their rubric. We had workshops for rhetorical questions, cohension, factual arguments and adverbs to stress the point. 

The children made incredible links and showed a wonderful curiosity to their editing. 

The children worked so hard today and Mr Tompkinson and Miss Wood are so proud of them all!

Today’s selfie stars must go to Elsie, Isabella and Terrel, who showed incredible focus and dedication to their writing and produced some very well improved pieces of work.


Well done Year 4, keep being amazing keep being you 

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