A cold winter setting

Snowy, picturesque mountains. Enticing Icey rivers. Warm, cosy cabins. A roaring but welcoming fireplace. This sounds like a perfect setting for a winter write. This afternoon Year 4 DT took to their writing books to begin writing the first draft of their winter descriptions.

The children made a fantastic start with vivid and powerful descriptions of their winter settings.img_1510img_1511img_1512img_1513

We had some amazing opening settings with snow glistening trees, cosy winter cabins, and beautiful winter walks. The children were very creative with how they set their descriptive write up, and we discovered how writing in the first person (imagining you are there) made for a powerful and imaginative description.

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With lots to edit and build upon tomorrow the children are very excited about bringing their amazing winter writes to an end.

However. The selfie star of the day must go to a person who has shown great passion in all their learning today. Well done Mr Alfie Scott. Your maths and narrative based descriptive setting was very impressive.

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Well done Year 4. Stay amazing

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