Feedback Fridays

Last week year 4 DT we took a little time out of our busy schedule to do some important editing and discussing about writing. The children were presented with a short mystery text and set about analysing it with the aim of providing group feedback about what we thought about the unknown text.

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The children discussed their thoughts and ideas on the text really well, picking out its use of vocabulary, grammar types, adjectives and use of words! We each wrote two pieces of feedback and came to together as a class to give a whole overview.

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The children were really engaged in their feedbacking and many of their ideas will be used to start editing our own work in writing!

well done Year 4 keep being you!

#feebackfridays

 

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